Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Last Grammar Post YAY!
I have lots of trouble dangling modifiers. I never knew what they were but i have seen that in a lot of my papers this is what I get marked for. In my papers I always have sentences that are not complete that are just "dangling" there like the phrase suggests.
A dangling modifiers is a word or phrase for which the logical headword cannot be found within the sentence.
Ex:
After reading the chapter, the author seemed to have a sound argument.
Many useful techniques are learned attending this seminar.
Correct Way:
"After reading the chapter, I believed that the author had a sound argument."
"Attending this seminar, you will learn many useful techniques."
For further explanation for the reason of the use of dangling modifiers use this website:
http://www.geocities.com/athens/aegean/6354/grammar.html#Modifiers
Sunday, April 19, 2009
Oh Beautiful
Many other countries wish that they had what our country has, freedom, a better government and liberties. I did not really realize that by having all of these amazing things that everyone else would hate us.
Wednesday, April 8, 2009
common words that sound alike
Some of these words are like:
except and accept
affect and effect ( this one kills me)
advise and advice
conscience and conscious
and there are much more...
For more of these words and how to tell them apart visit this website:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_spelhomo.html
Tuesday, March 31, 2009
Grammar Post
These following two websites below helped me get a better understanding on what a thesis statement requires and how I can be better in writing mine.
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
Possible Modes
http://lrs.ed.uiuc.edu/students/fwalters/causeconnect.html
this other link talks more thoroughly about what a cause and effect essay is:
http://essayinfo.com/essays/cause_and_effect_essay.php
Another Mode that I am thinking about using is exemplification mode. For more understanding of what and exemplification essay entails these websites proved to be helpful:
http://www.swiftpapers.com/howto/22-Exemplification___Illustration_Essa.html
http://www.essaytown.com/writing/exemplification-essay
Wednesday, March 25, 2009
effect and affect
Effect and affect sound similar but they are still used differently in whatever case you may be in.
Effect
Effect with an e has a lot of subtle meanings as a noun, but to me the meaning "a result" seems to be at the core of all the definitions. For example, you can say, "The effect was eye-popping," or "The sound effects were amazing," or "The rain had no effect on Amy's hairdo."
Affect
Affect with an a means "to influence," as in, "The arrows affected Ardvark," or "The rain affected Amy's hairdo." Affect can also mean, roughly, "to act in a way that you don't feel," as in, "She affected an air of superiority."
For more about effect and affect I found this website that is very helpful:
http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/affect-versus-effect.aspx
Friday, March 20, 2009
Up-Date on Research Paper
I stuck to my dealine I got my research topic which is:
What are the effects that bullying has on a students education and on themselves?
I also started writing my paper and i have about six pages typed already:) I talked about
- Introduction to bullying
- who are the bullies
- who are the victims
- effects of bullying
I also have nine sources right now but i am still looking for more.
I am not done yet but its a working progress. If you have any ideas for me let me know.
Rosanna
Wednesday, March 11, 2009
Suject- Verb Agreement

Subject -verb agreement is basically what the term says that the subject of the sentence needs to agree with the action.
For Example:
Singular subjects need singular verbs
plural subjects need plural verbs.
In these two sentences the verb and the subject agree with each other. In the first sentence brother is singular so there for the verb is singular too. Then in the second sentence sisters is plural so the verb, are, is plural as well.
These are not the only rules that come with subject -verb agreement, there is much more.
For this rule and many more visit:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/GRAMMAR/sv_agr.htm
Sunday, March 8, 2009
Lets Play 20 Questions
1- Is homeschooling a good alternative education?
2- Is home schooling becoming more popular?
3- How can bullying be stopped in schools?4-What methods can schools use to prevent school shootings?
5- What does Obama think to do about the education in U.S. schools?
6- What are the top problems that students face in schools?
7- Is zero- tolerance good to have in schools?
8-What are school vouchers?
9- Should we require students to start learning a second language at a younger age?
10- Should high schools allow open campuses during lunch?
11-Is special education getting better in schools?
12-Why do teachers recieve such low wages?
13-Should cell phones be allowed in schools?
14- Should we teach sex education in schools?
15-What can be done about truancies in schools?
16- Has the drop out rates in U.S. schools gone up?
17-Why do students drop out of school?
18-Does poverty affect learning?
19-How is it that profiency in schools is going down?
20- What has No Child Left Behind really done for U.S. schools?
Tuesday, March 3, 2009
Underling and Italics
When wanting to know when to use Italics and when to underline a word there are only some simple items that need to be remembered:
Italics
- words or phrases that you wish to emphasize
- foreign words that are not commonly used in English
- Journals and Magazines
- Plays
- Long Musical Pieces
- and much more
For examples this is a very helpful website:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/italics.htm
Underlining
- words used as words themselves
- television programs
For more explanation go to:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_overvw.html
Television in our lives/ Wome Do Get Hurt!
Television has a huge effect on our society right now. Billions of people watch it everyday and they see many false ideas on how life really is. They encourage people to think that they can just rise to fame with ease, like Kendall said," they too can be the next American Idol." People spend so much time and money dreaming of ideas that they have seen on television. I bet each one of us has wished that we could be like that person on that show one time or another.
We spend so much money on televisions shows and commercials everyday. I think that instead of spending hundreds of thousands of dollars on commercials and shows, they should save it on things that are way more important especially with society we have now. I really like this essay it made me think and see how some of these shows are really portrayed.
In reading," Two Ways a Woman Can Get Hurt," it ties into the first essay that I read about the media. Once again it shows how the media plays a big role in our lives. In the being of the essay it says that, " glorify," rape and violence on television had made it seem to be okay in real life. The author of this essay, Jean Kilbourne, does a good job in using the advertisements to show her readers examples of how the media has become so much about sexuality and how men are dominant over woman.
In the media we can see for ourselves all the abuse that goes on the television, it is everywhere. When there is so much violence on television, it makes people think that it okay to just go around and maybe beat their wife or partner. We see how celebrities are always on the news for beating there girlfriends or wives and not getting any real consequences for their action. It is all because they are powerful rich men that dominate over everyone. Also, in the media like Kilbourne said it makes men think that they have to have control over the woman or else they are, " whipped." The media just needs to change its point of view because it is giving ideas that are not good for their public. Yes, they might be making money from all the advertisements they make or the shows they put on but is it all really worth it if it hurts someone?
Saturday, February 28, 2009
Check Please!
When I read this story it reminded me a lot of the job right now and I keep thinking to myself how lucky I was that this job was not going to be permanent. I work in my town's Dairy Queen right now and even if it might not be as hectic as a real fast food restaurant it does have its crazy times. When I read Ehrenreich's descriptions of the customers that she saw coming in, it took me back to all of the different types of people that I have encountered at my job. It was neat to see how this story related a lot to me as I bet it has for a lot of us.
In " Serving In Florida," it relates back to the poem by Sharon Olds's called , " Seven Floors Up." Both of the writers are observing and talking about these people's lifestyles but the only difference is that Ehrenreich in " Serving In Florida," is not just observing it see is living it as well. Olds's in her poem was just observing the homeless man and thinking of what he might be feeling but Ehrenreich actually knows what the people around her are feeling because she is one of them.
" Serving In Florida," was a really interesting essay to read. It made me see again, like all the articles I have read in Rereading America the importance of furthering my education. I don't know about you guys, but I don't want to be working at Dairy Queen forever and making banana splits until i die. :)
Tuesday, February 24, 2009
A or An??
One thing that has worked for me to remember these rules on An and A, have been writing lots of sentences and seeing which word would sound better in them. Also, i looked up the rules that i need to follow for A and An so to know that I am using them correctly from now on.
Rules:
"A" goes before all words that begin with consonants.
a cat
a dog
a purple onion
a buffalo
a big apple
with one exception: Use an before unsounded h.
an honorable peace
an honest error
"An" goes before all words that begin with vowels:
an apricot
an egg
an Indian
an orbit
an uprising
with two exceptions: When u makes the same sound as the y in you, or o makes the same sound as w in won, then a is used.
a union
a united front
a unicorn
a used napkin
a U.S. ship
a one-legged man
For more help with An and A this website has proved to be helpful for me:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/esl/esliart.html
Art and Politics
In the next poem called,"From Seven Floors Up,"by Sharon Olds's a man is up in his building and he is observing a homeless man. He goes on to write a poem about the differences between himself and that man down on the bottom of his building. He has a nice warm place to go to at night and the homeless man just has to go to where ever he can find shelter. Olds's wants readers to see how it would be like to be a homeless man and have the feeling of what that man has to do every day. She gives us a very good visual of what is happening, with her use of detailed language. It is almost like you are the person that is on the seventh floor, looking down at the man.
Art can relate to politics in many ways, whether it be a poem, painting or photograph. The people that are writing these poems or drawing painting could be expressing what they feel about the government. It is a way for them to represent themselves differently and not having to go out there and speak what they are feeling. When we look at art it can be of any subject you can think of and of course that includes politics.
Wednesday, February 18, 2009
Transtions
I know that there are a lot of words that can help a transition in your paper such as:
Addition:also, again, as well as, besides, coupled with, furthermore, in addition, likewise, moreover, similarly
Consequence:accordingly, as a result, consequently, for this reason, for this purpose, hence, otherwise, so then, subsequently, therefore, thus, thereupon, wherefore.
They come in categories and there are so many other words that one can use and you can find these and other words at: http://www.studygs.net/wrtstr6.htm
Transitions really help a paper flow better and help the reader not be overwhelmed, for these and other explanations of what transitions do go to:http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/574/01/
Wednesday, February 11, 2009
Who is it? Whom is it? Who knows??
The way I now remember how to tell the difference between who and whom are with these simple definitions:
Whom: is an object
Who: is a subject
Also you can try the he/ him approach.
Whom = him
Who= he
Ex:Original statement: James didn’t know who/whom would win.
Replace with he/him: James didn’t know he would win.
Therefore: James didn’t know who would win.
Original statement: With who/whom should Trey go?
Rephrase and replace with he/him: Should Trey go with him?
Therefore: With whom should Trey go?
For more help these following websites are the places to go:
http://editing.suite101.com/article.cfm/how_to_use_who_and_whom_correctly
http://web.ku.edu/~edit/whom.html
Sunday, February 8, 2009
Bro.. i think not
Wednesday, February 4, 2009
On and On and On..
a run-on sentence is when a sentence has too many ideas and runs on too long . If you have this problem, don't worry. It is quite easy to fix. The first thing you need to do is identify when a sentence is a run-on. A run-on (or run-on sentence) is a sentence that really has TWO sentences (or complete ideas) INCORRECTLY combined into one. It is okay to combine two sentences into one, but you must follow some rules.
For example: I saw a teacher who cares.
It can be fixed to say: I saw a teacher. Who cares?
For more rules and insight visit:
http://www.myenglishteacher.net/runonsentences.html
Sunday, February 1, 2009
Average Joe
In his essay Mike Rose goes on to describe how he was placed incorrectly in classes that he was not suppose to be in. He never knew about his incorrect placement until two years into his eduction and by then he had already built an image of himself as being a poor student. Then after he finds out that he was placed wrongly he has to change his classes and is more confused than ever. He just wants to be average he says like he remembered one of his classmates say one time in class. But it was hard for Mike to ever feel that way when he was always being confused about who he truly was. I would have been confused too if they told me I had to be in some certain classes because I had failed miserably in my entrance exams and then tell you that you weren't even suppose to be in those classes in the first place.
The essay makes us look once again at our education system and how it is full of flaws. We need to try and make sure that we check everything when we are getting out eduction because it is one of the most valuable treasures that we have. Many students could be like Mr. Rose, being placed in classes that they shouldn't and making them feel something that they shouldn't. I know this from experience because one of my younger siblings was placed in a ELL class that he did not need at all. My brother know English better than most Americans, no accent or anything and they put him in this class without any of my family knowing. He had just been in these classes and he had the same feelings that Mike Rose had been feeling in school. Hopefully one day all these flaws in the education system will be worked out because like Mike Rose there are so many students that have gone through or are going through the same thing. And when they finally do find out what happened it is a little to late.
Wednesday, January 28, 2009
I Semi Understand this...
But now I have the solution to my semicolon dilemma. I can say goodbye to not knowing where to put a semicolon and hello to knowing what the heck I am doing.
A semicolon is used to separate coordinate elements, usually independent clauses. It functions more like a weak period than like a strong comma.
Ex: You should apply for that job; you have the qualifications, and you are not happy in your present job.
They could have just simply put a period after the word job but instead they put a semicolon so that they could continue with the thouggt and make it complete.
http://www.essortment.com/all/semicolonrules_ruhi.htm
Tuesday, January 27, 2009
American Idiot!
He has a lot of facts to back up his information and I really liked reading about all of the facts on the people of the United States. Who knew that students at Harvard, Yale and those other high performing did not know when the Civil War took place but they sure knew who Beavis and Butt Head.
Sunday, January 25, 2009
Changing American Families
One can see that Judy Root Aulette’s researched a lot on this topic and was able to use what she discovered to make a well written article. She could have made her writing boring and just have made it been all about the research, but instead she was able to use it as a guide for her paper. I liked how she would write about the different social groups and then use an example of a real person to back up what she was saying. In doing so, she gave the readers more in depth about the subject and let us see that these social class differences really do exist. The research in this essay was really essential because without it the writing would have not been as effective and would she would have not been able to back up what she was saying. Some people when they use research in a paper, they just let it take over and the paper becomes fact and not them, but not this paper. Judy was able to distribute all of her research in a way that made her paper flow and transition smoothly from one subject to the next.
Also dealing with the Moynihan Report, Judy shows that this report has many flaws and that it is not correct. These reports are no truly describing the African- American families for who they really are. These reports are misleading people and saying things that aren’t actually true. Aulette did not look to write a lot about the Moynihan Report because she did not approve of what it said. Instead she goes and proves it wrong and that is what a good researcher does.
Wednesday, January 21, 2009
Lie vs. Lay
The correct way to identify the ways to use lay and lie are these rules:
Lie-to recline
The present tense of lie (to recline) is lie or lying.
Ex: I am lying on the bed.
I lie on the bed.
Lay- to put or place
The present tense of lay (to put or place) is lay or laying.
Ex:I am laying the book on the table.
I lay the book on the table.
A site that is has these rules and more helpful tips is :
http://hubpages.com/hub/Grammar_Mishaps__Lie_vs_Lay
Monday, January 19, 2009
High School Prepares you for College?

In this political cartoon it trying to show us how it is going to be like if we do not go to college after high school. We are going to be put in the same situation that this political cartoon portrays. There are some many people out there that think that there is no point in going to college. I have heard many say,” I just spent most of my life in school, why would I want to keep going?” They do not realize how hard it is going to be for them if they do not continue their education. Like this cartoon they are going to be stumped at the questions that their employers ask them.
For me this political cartoon stuck out because I know of so many people that just went to high school but they never did anything afterwards so they are stuck in the same town with minimum wage jobs and they aren’t progressing in their lives at all. This political cartoon like all the other ones I have seen is to make people realize about the real situations that people go through and that is happening to possibly people we know. In the cartoon it’s telling us that graduating high school is not going to be enough. We all need to keep going with our education if we really want to succeed in life and not end up in Human Resources like the guy in the cartoon.
The cartoon has just made me realize how lucky I am to be going forth with my higher education and not going to be in the picture like that one guy wondering how the heck high school prepared me for the real world.
Education and War

Tuesday, January 13, 2009
Commas Everywhere!
A comma by definition is a punctuation mark used to indicate the separation of ideas or of elements within a sentence. The definition seems simple enough but still many people like myself still struggle with the rules.
Here is a site that gives you all the comma rules, and can be handy to have when writing any paper.
http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/commas.asp
Sunday, January 11, 2009
Life as once knew it
Now when we look at Stephanie Cootntz passage called, " What we Miss About the 1950's," it is also comparing life of the 1950's to the life we have now. She talks about how her mother had so much respect for her when she was a child and let her make her own decisions on many things. Although as she looks back she would not let her own twelve- year-old son do whatever he wanted now in this day and age. It even said in the text that the people who said that 1950's had been the best decade did not mean in a literal sense. The 1950's might have been a good period, but really no one wants to relive it again.
My interpretation at first when i started reading was that Cootntz was going to talk about how everyone loved the 1950's and how they wished they were back in that time, but really that was not it. In the 1996 poll by Knight Rider, most people might have chosen the 1950's for the best time to raise children but really they didn't seem to mean it. It was as if they were contradicting everything they had just said. The passage maybe called, " What we Really Miss About the 1950's," but really do they miss anything at all.
Both of these authors though both convey the same message that life is not really all that it seems to be. There are not the "perfect lives that are seen on T.V. and no one really wants to go back to the 1950's. The first author uses a story so that readers can interpret it for what the true meaning of it really is and the second one states fact based on a poll so that people get the literal sense of what life was really like in the 1950's. They both really make you think and see how your life is right now.
Monday, January 5, 2009
Introduction to Rereading America
There might be some books, people and many other things that may contradict what you believe as an individual. In this book Rereading American, the text in the with in these pages might challenge or complicate our opinions. We all have our different beliefs about things and may say that we stick to those beliefs, but sometimes there are many things that make us question the things we believe.
This book can change the way we view our relationships, heritage, religion and beliefs. Also, since this is a English class, we may find that this books shows us many different ways of writing that we had never thought of. I might always stayed with one way of writing a paper and maybe after i read the contents of this book i will have gotten a different perspective of how to write.
